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What’s the most important date in your calendar and why?

이한범/2024-10-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My the most important date is September 18th because It is my birthday We commonly go to the form on the weekend, because It give us comfort
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Han Beom! Our birthdays are special days. I hope you always spend yours well with your family. Have a great day today! ^^
~T. Jewel
My the most important date is September 18th because It is my birthday
>>The most important date in my calendar is September 18th because it is my birthday.
We commonly go to the form on the weekend, because It give us comfort
>>We usually go to the farm on the weekend because it gives us comfort.
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