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Which place or country would you like to visit at least once in your life?

장재영/2024-10-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I want to go to Iceland. Because Iceland has a lot of Milky Way. I want to go see that. That's a beautiful.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, James! I hope you will be able to go to Iceland one day. The space also fascinates me. I would love to stare at the Milky Way on a clear starry night. Let's talk again soon. See you!

--Teacher Anji

I want to go to Iceland. Because Iceland has a lot of Milky Way.
>> I want to go to Iceland because you can see the Milky Way from there.
I want to go see that.
>> CORRECT
That's a beautiful.
>> CORRECT