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What are the best and worst things about October for you?

차유진/2024-10-01

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The best things about October for me is becoming winter and there are many holidays. The worst things about October for me is a getting Vaccinated against the flu.
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Cheers,
Jean~~




                                  What are the best and worst things about October for you?


The best things about October for me is becoming winter and there are many holidays.
>> The best things about October for me are it is the sign that winter is coming and there are many holidays.

The worst things about October for me is a getting Vaccinated against the flu.
>> The worst thing about October for me is getting a flu vaccine. 

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