I think that I do what I want after thinking once more and doing my assignment.
First, I want to buy beautiful clothes and my favorite singer's goods.
But, I am not doing part-time job and my parents give me allowance.
So, I have to reduce unnecessary spending and think again what I really want.
Second, If I want to take a rest or hang out with my friend, I must finish my assignment or homework first.
I think that I can hang out with my friend any time but my assinment has deadline.
So I think about what is more important for me.
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I think that I do what I want after thinking once more and doing my assignment.
>> I think I do what I want after I reconsider and finish my homework.
First, I want to buy beautiful clothes and my favorite singer's goods.
>>CORRECT!
But, I am not doing part-time job and my parents give me allowance.
>> I do not do part-time jobs because my parents give me an allowance.
So, I have to reduce unnecessary spending and think again what I really want.
>> So, I have to reduce unnecessary spending and reconsider what I really want.
Second, If I want to take a rest or hang out with my friend, I must finish my assignment or homework first.
>> CORRECT!
I think that I can hang out with my friend any time but my assinment has deadline.
>> I think I can hang out with my friends anytime, but my assignment has a deadline.
So I think about what is more important for me.
>> So, I still think about what is more important for me.