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When shopping, do you often look for cheaper alternatives?

김예린/2024-10-01

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Yes. First I browse for same one by my smartphone. Sometimes they sell online more cheaper like using coupons. Therefore I also buy in online when I already wore it offline. Second when there's no more cheaper one which is same, then I search for similar one. Because of trend, there are many clothes with similar designs in many shopping malls.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey, Lin! Great strategy! Browsing online for deals and exploring similar options when needed can really save you money. 
~T. Jenna

Yes. First I browse for same one by my smartphone. 
>>Yes. First, I browse for the same one on my smartphone.
OR
>>Certainly. Initially, I utilize my smartphone to search for an identical item
Sometimes they sell online more cheaper like using coupons. 
>>Sometimes, they sell online at a lower price due to available coupons.
Therefore I also buy in online when I already wore it offline. 
>>Therefore, I also buy online when I have already wore / tried it on offline.
Second when there's no more cheaper one which is same, then I search for similar one. 
>>Second, when there's no cheaper one that is the same, I search for a similar one.
Because of trend, there are many clothes with similar designs in many shopping malls.
Correct, or
>>Given the influence of popular trends, many clothing items with similar designs can be found across various shopping malls.
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