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If you had an extra hour each day, what hobby would you spend it on?

임주미/2024-10-01

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

If I had an extra time every day,I will play tennis .I want be a player better than now when I play tennis ,I game with partner. I usually I don't get win because of me. so I want to be a good player,

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Ju Mi! Improvement comes with regular practice. With your dedication and a positive attitude, you can become a skilled player in the future. ^^ Have a great day today!

~T. Jewel

If I had an extra time every day,I will play tennis .

>>If I had extra time every day, I would play tennis.

I want be a player better than now

>>I want to be a better player than I am now.
when I play tennis ,I game with partner.

>>When I play tennis, I play games with a partner.

I usually I don't get win because of me.

>>I usually don’t win because of myself.
so I want to be a good player,

>>So, I want to be a better player.