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Does music have the power to change your mood? How does music affect you?

오소민/2024-09-30

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
The music gives me big joy and smile. For example, when I'm sad or angry, it gives me joy. So, I like every type musics!
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ridoria! I agree with your statement. Personally, music becomes a stress reliever. I listen to good music and it puts me in a good mood again.
-T. Sonny
The music gives me big joy and smile. 
>>Music gives me a lot of joy and happiness.
For example, when I'm sad or angry, it gives me joy. 
>>Correct!
So, I like every type musics!
>>So, I like every genre of music.

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