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Is it more important to be liked or respected? Why?
김영순/2024-09-30
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
In my personal opinion,
Being liked is different from being respected.
So, I can"t compare with them.
Being liked is relate to personal tendencies such as
kindness, humor ,equal relationship.
being respected comes from acquired results such as
achievement,priority,social influence.
Conclusively,
Both of them are important.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Young Soon!
I admire your passion and your enthusiasm.
I know you can live life to the fullest.
Never give up on your dreams. ^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
In my personal opinion, Being liked is different from being respected.
>> In my personal opinion, being liked is different from being respected.
So, I can"t compare with them.
So, I can"t compare with them.
>> That's why I can't compare them.
Being liked is relate to personal tendencies such as kindness, humor ,equal relationship.
Being liked is relate to personal tendencies such as kindness, humor ,equal relationship.
>> Being liked is related to personal tendencies such as kindness, humor and equal relationship.
being respected comes from acquired results such as achievement, priority, social influence.
being respected comes from acquired results such as achievement, priority, social influence.
>> Being respected comes from acquired results such as achievement, priority and social influence.
Conclusively, Both of them are important.
Conclusively, Both of them are important.
>> In conclusion, both of them are important.
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