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Sep 27th homework

안연희/2024-09-30

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I like it not only because I don't need to woory about sweating during swimming. This sport can be enjoyed even on a trip. People in all ages can enjoy swimming whether their jonts are good or not.
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Yeon Hee,

Thanks for doing your homework. You did great!

-Teacher Ash

I like it not only because I don't need to woory about sweating during swimming.
>> I like it not only because I don't need to worry about sweating when swimming.

This sport can be enjoyed even on a trip.
>>CORRECT

People in all ages can enjoy swimming whether their jonts are good or not.
>> People in all ages can enjoy swimming even if their joints are in bad condition. 
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