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What are the advantages and disadvantages of solo travel?

신봉규/2024-09-30

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The advantages of solo travel are I can do whatever i want. the disadvantages of solo travel is lonely.
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Hello! I'm so glad you made the effort to finish the homework. You did an outstanding job expressing your thoughts—keep up the excellent work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


The advantages of solo travel are I can do whatever i want. the disadvantages of solo travel is lonely.
>> The advantage of solo travel is that I can do whatever I want. However, the disadvantage is that it can feel lonely.
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