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류건우/2024-09-30
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: What are some risks in traveling?
A: I think the most common risk while traveling is getting lost.
I think getting lost is one of the most dangerous risk because when they're abroad, they can't actually communicate well with people.
Also, I think forgetting something could be the risk, too.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. I think getting lost is one of the most dangerous risk because when they're abroad, they can't actually communicate well with people.
3. Also, I think forgetting something could be the risk, too.
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think the most common risk while traveling is getting lost.
>>CORRECT!
2. I think getting lost is one of the most dangerous risk because when they're abroad, they can't actually communicate well with people.
>>I think getting lost is one of the most dangerous risks because when they're abroad, they can't actually communicate well with people.
3. Also, I think forgetting something could be the risk, too.
>>Also, I think forgetting something could be a risk, too.
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