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임주미/2024-09-30

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there are a few ways . I think we have to be kind ourselves, when we are suffering especially we also should loved by ourselves

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Hello, Ju Mi! Self-kindness is very important. The first person we should be kind to is ourselves. ^^ Thank you for today, Ju Mi! Enjoy!

~T. Jewel

there are a few ways . I think we have to be kind ourselves, when we are suffering especially

>>There are a few ways we can be kind to ourselves, especially when we are suffering.
we also should loved by ourselves

>>We should also love ourselves.