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류건우/2024-09-19

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Q: What are some situations wherein there is a need to lie? A: I think it's when people are feeling so low. When I'm in a situation where a person is low, I think I need to lie for that person to be fine again. I think people need to lie also in other situations, too.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think it's when people are feeling so low.
>>CORRECT!

2. When I'm in a situation where a person is low, I think I need to lie for that person to be fine again.
>>When I'm in a situation where a person is feeling low, I think I need to lie for that person to be fine again.

3. I think people need to lie also in other situations, too.
>>I think people also need to lie in other situations, too.

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