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Is it okay not to be honest?

도은경/2024-09-19

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

No.it’s not okay not to be honest. Because once I wasn’t honest to myself and world, it sometime feels simple to me.But later lies was getting to big so my mind is so painful. And friendship and family relation is bad to me. After that I want to keep honest if I can.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Eun Kyung!

I think it's really hard to be honest always.

It is better for me though to not say anything than to lie.

Andrea

No.it’s not okay not to be honest.Because once I wasn’t honest to myself and world, it sometime feels simple to me.

>> No, it is not okay not to be honest because once I wasn't honest to myself and the world, it sometimes feels simple to me.

But later lies was getting to big so my mind is so painful.

>> But later on, lies were getting big so it hurts my mind.

And friendship and family relation is bad to me.

>> My relationship with friend and family might get ruined.

After that I want to keep honest if I can.

>> After that, I want to be honest as much as possible.