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도은경/2024-09-13

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I like god dionysos.Because he is the god of richness and wine. So I like wine and richness. When I am with him I would be happy maybe.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Eun Kyeong!^^ 

I am not good in Greek Mythology. hahaha
I only know Poseidon because of the movie.
People say that Greek mythology is interesting but not for me. :) 

Andrea 

I like god dionysos.Because he is the god of richness and wine. 
>> I like Dionysus because he is the god of richness and wine.

So I like wine and richness. When I am with him I would be happy maybe.
>> I like richness and win so if every I will be with him, I may feel happy. 
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