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Do you prefer a planned vacation or a spontaneous one? Why?

김혜선/2024-09-13

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Do you prefer a planned vacation or a spontaneous one? Why? : I prefer a planned vacation. I used to be a spontaneous person. I visited Italy with any plans missed many famous places and restaurants. I became a planed person. I plan my itinerary at least 3 weeks before.

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Hi!

Thank you for sharing your answer with me.
It was interesting to learn that your travel experiences have influenced a change in your personality.
I think it was a positive change! ^^

~ Teacher Gina

I prefer a planned vacation.

>> CORRECT.

I used to be a spontaneous person.

>> CORRECT.

I visited Italy with any plans missed many famous places and restaurants.

>> I visited Italy without any plans and missed many famous places and restaurants.

I became a planed person.

>> Since then, I’ve become more organized.

>> Or: Since then, I’ve become a planner.

I plan my itinerary at least 3 weeks before.

>> Now, I plan my itinerary at least 3 weeks in advance.

>> Or: Now, I plan my itinerary at least 3 weeks before my trip.