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임주미/2024-09-13

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I guess the most popular beverage is coffee in the world .we can see korean to drink coffee each day easily. Recently I stopped coffee for healty

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Hi, Ju Mi! You really prioritize your health above all. That's great. I don't drink coffee either. ^^ Have a fun holiday. See you next week!

~T. Jewel

I guess the most popular beverage is coffee in the world .

>>I guess the most popular beverage in the world is coffee.

we can see korean to drink coffee each day easily.

>>We can usually see Koreans drinking coffee every day.
Recently I stopped coffee for healty

>>Recently, I stopped drinking coffee for health reasons.