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Do you have any harmless bad habits? Do they annoy other people?

김보연/2024-09-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Since I was born, I have not performed muti-tasking. while I concentrate on the work I do, I can't hear and care other work. So whenever some people talk to me about something, but I couldn't answer what they said. Then, they usually annoy to me. I also tried to improve my this bad attitude, but it was really hard to change my habit.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Betty ^^

It's typical for us to unconsciously neglect everything around us when we're too preoccupied and focused on the task at hand. That is what sets us apart from one another. While some people pay close attention to what they are doing to prevent making mistakes, there are also those who lack the flexibility to multitask. Therefore, everyone must ultimately have more patience with one another in order to fully understand each other.

Chammy

Since I was born, I have not performed muti-tasking.

>> Since I was born, I have not performed multi-tasking.

>> I have never multitask since I was born.

while I concentrate on the work I do, I can't hear and care other work.

>>While I concentrate on the work I do, I can't hear and care about other work.

>> While I am focused on my work, I cannot hear or care about other people's work.

So whenever some people talk to me about something, but I couldn't answer what they said.

>> That's why I find it difficult to respond to people when they speak to me about something.

Then, they usually annoy to me.

>> Then, they usually get annoyed by me.

>> Then, I generally irritate them.

I also tried to improve my this bad attitude, but it was really hard to change my habit.

>>I also tried to improve this awful attitude, but it was difficult to change my habit.