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Sadness

이준규/2024-09-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Does sadness play an important role in people's lives? I think sadness play an important role in people's lives. Because, after feeling sad, I can develop.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey Justine! it would be prefect if you won't start a sentence with a connector such as "because" since its' main purpose is to connect one idea to another. Overall, this is a great sentence. T. Linda

I think sadness play an important role in people's lives. Because, after feeling sad, I can develop.
>> I think sadness plays an important role in people's lives because I can grow after feeling sad.
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