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What small successes do you have every day?

김보연/2024-09-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I really wanted to do some academic activities for vacation. so I registered to join Power English for improving my English skill. After Since I join the class, I have waken up at 7:35am in the every weekday morning and I have did my homework every class well. I think these are my small successes that I do have everyday

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Betty!

Being able to accomplish productivity and doing something worthwhile is what I also consider a bit of success. And I must admit that you are doing your homework satisfactorily, knowing the fact that you are busy too ^_____^ Thank you~

Chammy

I really wanted to do some academic activities for vacation.

>> I really wanted to do some academic activity over my vacation.

so I registered to join Power English for improving my English skill.

>> So I registered at Power English to improve my English skills.

After Since I join the class, I have waken up at 7:35am in the every weekday morning and I have did my homework every class well.

>> Since starting the class, I have woken up at 7:35 a.m. on weekdays and completed my homework for each class well.

I think these are my small successes that I do have everyday

>> I think these are the small successes that I do have every day.