/2024-09-10
ȸ ÷ֽ ۹Hello, I'm Hana, and I'd like to present my opinion on the topic, "Are Social networking sites good for our society?" >> CORRECT I think social networking sites is bad for our society. >>I think social networking sites are bad for our society. First, the addiction social networking is very serious and controversial problem in nowadays. >> First, addiction to social networking is a very serious and controversial problem nowadays. I'm sure that you know Youtube and Instagram. >> I'm sure that you know YouTube and Instagram. The addiction of their short-form contents has bad influence for young students or kids. >> The addiction to their short-form content has a bad influence on young students or kids. For example, compared to before, when short-form content was not introduced, social networking activities have increased dramatically, and the number of young children whose sight is rapidly deteriorating is on the rise. >> CORRECT Second, The meaning of social networking has already been distorted for many years. >> Second, the meaning of social networking has already been distorted for many years. Very few people grow and communicate socially through social networking, but 90% of people write comments mixed with criticism and ridicule. >> CORRECT A case in point is the witch hunt. >> CORRECT In conclusion, we have to find solutions about these problems. >> In conclusion, we have to find solutions to these problems. |