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What is your favorite drink? Is there a special memory or story behind it?

임주미/2024-09-09

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My favorite drink is wine. Among them I like white wine and the varity is Sauvignon blanc by New zealand I want to visit to the winery in New zwaland somday. I sometimes drink wine with the meals

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Hello, Ju Mi! Thank you for sharing your top drink choice!^^I hope you'll have one today and enjoy the rest of your Monday!

~T. Jewel

My favorite drink is wine.

>>CORRECT

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>>Wine is my favorite drink.

Among them I like white wine and the varity is Sauvignon blanc by New zealand

>>Among them, I like white wine, and the variety I prefer is Sauvignon Blanc from New Zealand.

I want to visit to the winery in New zwaland somday.

>>I want to visit a winery in New Zealand someday.

I sometimes drink wine with the meals

>>I sometimes drink wine with meals.