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Aromatherapy

양기연/2024-09-09

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I have heard that aromatherapy helps to improve some symptoms, such as anxiety, sleep, mood,and pain. When I experienced the therapy first, I felt my stress relieved. After getting massage with coconut oil, I could fall a sound sleep. That's why I always seek out massage shops with aromatherapy whenever I travel southeastern countries.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Gi Yean!

I agree with you! Aromatherapy helps us relax more, aside from the massage itself. That is why even in my country, massage shops or spas use aromatherapy because it improves the ambiance of the place and makes the experience more holistic for customers.

- T. Caitlyn

I have heard that aromatherapy helps to improve some symptoms, such as anxiety, sleep, mood,and pain.

>> CORRECT

When I experienced the therapy first, I felt my stress relieved.

>> When I first experienced the therapy, I felt my stress relieved.

After getting massage with coconut oil, I could fall a sound sleep.

>> After getting a massage with coconut oil, I could fall into a sound sleep.

That's why I always seek out massage shops with aromatherapy whenever I travel southeastern countries.

>> That's why I always seek out massage shops with aromatherapy whenever I travel to Southeastern countries.