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차진혁/2024-09-08

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I think adults playing with toy is not matter because anyone can do what they want to do. But many adults don't play with toys.

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Here's your edited essay, Jimmy. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below. Have a good evening!

Cheers,

Jean~~

What do you think of adults playing with toys?

I think adults playing with toy is not matter because anyone can do what they want to do.

>> I think it doesn't matter if adults play with toys because anyone can do what they want to do.

But many adults don't play with toys.

>> CORRECT~~