I think the betterI drinks is cold drinks because cold drinks almost sweet and Fresh. And I like cold drinks, most people drink cold drinks in summer, and some people also drink cold drinks in winter.

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                      What are your thoughts don't the air quality in your country?

I think my country's the air quality is bad because fine dust and Covid-19 come from China.

>> I think my country's air quality is poor because of the fine dust and COVID-19 that came from China.

But dawn air is very good 👍 (fresh air)

>> But the air at dawn is very good. You can enjoy fresh air.