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ȸ ÷ֽ ۹Hi Eva,
Thank you for sharing your experience. It sounds like it was a very challenging time. Im glad to hear that you stayed safe at home, even though the storm caused a lot of damage. You did a great job explaining what happened and how it took time to recover. Keep up the good work with your writing!
~Teacher Cathy
I have been in a storm.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I have experienced a storm.
In 1996, we met the strong storm.
>>In 1996, we met a strong storm.
It rained 750 millimeters one night.
>>It rained 750 millimeters overnight.
The road are broken, a lot of house disappeared.
>>The roads were broken and a lot of houses disappeared.
One person died.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Somebody died.
I stayed at home.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I remained in my house.
It rained all night long.
>>CORRECT
OR>>The rain lasted all night long.
My house are safe.
>>My house was safe.
But electricity was out, telephone was cut off and filelds are flooded.
>>But the electricity was out, the telephone lines were cut off and the fields were flooded.
It took a lot of time to recover.
>>CORRECT
OR>>It had taken a lot of time to recover.
But we could do it, we are back daily lives.
>>But we were able to do it, and soon enough, we were back on our daily lives.