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Do you think pasta is better than other staple foods like rice, potatoes, bread and others?

박소은/2024-09-04

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
No, because rice and potatoes and bread is deilsouse and to me I don't like pasta.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Sunny!
Be careful of your spelling.
Take note of how to simplify your sentence.
Be more direct next time.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
No, because rice and potatoes and bread is deilsouse and to me I don't like pasta.
>> No, because rice, potatoes and bread are delicious and I don't even like pasta. 
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