Hi Min-Yeong,

Thank you for your homework! I enjoyed reading about your favorite dessert, cheesecake. Your answer was good, and it’s clear that you like baking it. To make your writing even better, let’s focus on capitalizing the first letter of each sentence and improving sentence construction. 

Keep up the good work, and I look forward to our next class!

Best,
Teacher Dana

question answer is B
>>> The answer to question no.1 is B.

my favorite dessert to bake is cheese cake. because i like cheese cake.
>>> My favorite dessert to bake is cheesecake because I like it.

I usually share cheese cake for my friends.
>>> I usually share cheesecake with my friends.