̺/2024-09-03
ȸ ÷ֽ ۹Hi Eva!
Thanks for doing your homework!
Youve made some great points about how childrens behavior can affect others
in restaurants. Its true that children might cry if theyre uncomfortable or
in a new place. Keep up the good work, and dont be afraid to add more details
to your writing. Youre on the right track!
~Teacher Cathy
When
children crying in the restaurant, l am so embassing.
>>I
feel so embarassed when children cry in the restaurant.
When
our children was young, I did't go big restaurant.
>>When
my children were young, we didn't go to big restaurants.
Why
chidren crying, fist chidren is not confortable something, second unfamiliar
place and feel hunger or sleep.
>>When
children cry, it might be because they're not comfortable, it's an unfamiliar
place for them, or they feel hungry or sleepy.
When
we go to restaurant we need to take care children's conditions.
>>When
we go to a restaurant, we need to take care of our children's conditions.
What I
recommend is don't go there.
>>I
recommend them not to go there.
Chidren
likes place to play confortable.
>>Children
like places where they can play comfortably.