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If you could star in a movie genre you’ve never tried before, which one would it be and what kind of

임주미/2024-09-03

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If I were actress I will be tall and pretty women.I want to play like Pippi Longstocking. When I was young I really loved Pippi.
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Hello, Ju Mi! You made an interesting choice of character to portray. ^^ Thank you for doing today's homework. Enjoy your day!
~T. Jewel
If I were actress I will be tall and pretty women.
>>If I were an actress, I would be a tall and beautiful woman.
I want to play like Pippi Longstocking.
>>I want to play a role like Pippi Longstocking.
When I was young I really loved Pippi.
>>CORRECT
OR
>>When I was young, I really loved Pippi Longstocking.
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