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Describe the world 100 years from now. Describe how people live, new inventions, and also the thing

김보연/2024-09-03

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After 100 years from now, there will be a lot of machines in world. People will move to Mars and find new job in there. Also, People will invent Anti-aging technology so they can live in more long time than now. But Our mind like being passionate and respecting others will not change.

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Hello, Betty!

I hope I can afford the anti-aging device when it comes out. For now, we can use deepfake technology to appear younger... Hahaha >.<

Chammy

After 100 years from now, there will be a lot of machines in world.

>> After 100 years from now, there will be a lot of machines in the world.

People will move to Mars and find new job in there.

>> People will move to Mars and find new jobs there.

Also, People will invent Anti-aging technology so they can live in more long time than now.

>> Also, people will invent Anti-aging technology so they can live longer than they do now.

But Our mind like being passionate and respecting others will not change.

>> But our passionate minds and respect for others will not change.