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Aside from financial reasons, why do we need to have a job?

이진태/2024-08-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Financial reasons take up alomost 100% in having a job. Another reason is preventing a laziness. If I do nothing, I wolud be lazy soon.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I’m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences—keep up the great effort!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

Financial reasons take up alomost 100% in having a job.
>> Financial reasons account for almost 100% of the motivation for having a job.

Another reason is preventing a laziness.
>>  Another reason is to prevent laziness. 

If I do nothing, I wolud be lazy soon.
>> If I did nothing, I would become lazy quickly.
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