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Are home-cooked meals the best? What’s the best thing to do after a lovely meal?

이진태/2024-08-22

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I prefer eating meals at home than eating outside. I'm fed up with outside food. because, they use too many seasoning. I usually sleep after eating meal for a short time just ten to twenty minutes at company. this nap makes me energized.

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Hi! I’m so happy you put in the effort to complete the homework. You did a brilliant job sharing your experiences—keep up the great work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I usually sleep after eating meal for a short time just ten to twenty minutes at company.
this nap makes me energized.
>> I usually take a short nap, just ten to twenty minutes, at work after eating. This nap helps me feel re-energized.

I prefer eating meals at home than eating outside.
>> I prefer eating meals at home rather than eating out.

I'm fed up with outside food. because, they use too many seasoning.
>>

I’m fed up with outside food because it often uses too many seasonings.