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Do you think men enjoy sports more than women?

이진태/2024-08-21

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I agree this premis. Almost every sports is required physical ability to win. Men usually is more powerful than women. Therefore, I believe most sports is male-friendly and men enjoy sports more than women. because it's a essence of sports.
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Hi there! I’m so pleased you completed the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your thoughts and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I agree this premis.
>> I agree with this premise.

Almost every sports is required physical ability to win.
>> Almost every sport requires physical ability to win.

Men usually is more powerful than women.
>>Men are usually more powerful than women.

Therefore, I believe most sports is male-friendly and men enjoy sports more than women. because it's a essence of sports.
>>Therefore, I believe most sports are male-friendly, and men enjoy sports more than women because it's the essence of sports.
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