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Explain the saying "Time is Gold."

이진태/2024-08-21

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We need time to earn money. in other words, we need to time in order to earn gold. Therefore, the time and gold is the same.
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~~Teacher Ryka^^


We need time to earn money. in other words, we need to time in order to earn gold.
>> We need time to earn money; in other words, we need time in order to earn gold. 
OR >>Time is essential for earning money, just as it is for accumulating gold.

Therefore, the time and gold is the same.
>> Therefore, time and gold are essentially the same.
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