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What is the most unusual thing you've ever eaten? Did it taste good or bad?

이진태/2024-08-21

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There are some fermented foods in Korea. I almost everything like it. However I don't like thornback. Thornback is a fish. Korean have a recipe fermented thornback. fermented thornback have bad smell like a ammonia in the restroom.

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Hi! I’m so happy you put in the effort to complete the homework. You did a brilliant job sharing your experiences—keep up the great work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

There are some fermented foods in Korea.
>> CORRECT
OR >>Korea has a variety of fermented foods.

I almost everything like it.
>> I like almost all of them.

However I don't like thornback.
>> CORRECT
OR >>However, I’m not fond of thornback.

Thornback is a fish. Korean have a recipe fermented thornback.
>> Thornback is a fish, and in Korea, there is a recipe for fermented thornback.

fermented thornback have bad smell like a ammonia in the restroom.
>> Fermented thornback has a strong smell, like ammonia in a restroom.