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Do you ever get angry with yourself? Why?

이진태/2024-08-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I sometimes get angry to me when I had a mistake repeatdly or something don't go well. I believe the anger makes me more strong. Anger is a kind of motivation.
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~~Teacher Ryka^^

I sometimes get angry to me when I had a mistake repeatdly or something don't go well.
>>  I sometimes get angry with myself when I repeatedly make mistakes or when things don’t go well.

I believe the anger makes me more strong.
>>  I believe that anger can make me stronger. 

Anger is a kind of motivation.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Anger can be a form of motivation.

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