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When you were a child, what did you want to be when you grew up?

임주미/2024-08-21

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When I was middie stuent I want to be a English teacher but I coudn't study because my parents were very poor . I have to save money from when I was young.

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Hello, Ju Mi! I think you had a very challenging childhood, but you persevered and worked hard to get where you are now. I’m proud of you. Enjoy your day!

~T. Jewel

When I was middie stuent I want to be a English teacher but I coudn't study because my parents were very poor .

>>When I was a middle school student, I wanted to be an English teacher, but I couldn’t study because my parents were very poor.

I have to save money from when I was young.

>>I had to save money when I was young.