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Imagine a day in the life of a character who has the power to stop time. How would you use this powe

현무/2024-08-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I'll transfer all the bad guys' money into my account.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi! I’m really happy you made the effort to complete the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I'll transfer all the bad guys' money into my account.

>> I'll transfer all the money from the bad guys into my account.

OR >> I’ll deposit all the funds from the bad guys into my account.