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What do you think is the right job for you when you grow up? Explain.

차진혁/2024-08-20

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I think president is the right job for me when I grow up because I have strong leadership. So I have been class president many times, and I want to be again.
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Here's another edited essay, Jimmy. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below. Good night and see you tomorrow!  


Cheers,
Jean~~




                                    What do you think is the right job for you when you grow up? Explain.


I think president is the right job for me when I grow up because I have strong leadership.
>> I think being a president is the right job for me when I grow up because I have strong leadership skills. 

So I have been class president many times, and I want to be again.
>> So I have been a class president many times, and I want to be one again.

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