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What did you do the day before yesterday and write about your plans for the day after tomorrow.

차진혁/2024-08-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I watched famous tv program, the program's name is "Traveld around the world since I was born seson4 in U.S.A". And my plans for the day after tomorrow is going to schoo. There is no exercise at Taekwondo academy, because it is vacation for 6 days from that day.
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Hello there, Jimmy!

Here's your corrected composition. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below.   


Cheers,
Jean~~




                What did you do the day before yesterday and write about your plans for the day after tomorrow.


I watched famous tv program, the program's name is "Traveld around the world since I was born seson4 in U.S.A".
>> I watched a famous TV program called "Traveling Around the World Since I was Born Season 4 in the U.S.A".

And my plans for the day after tomorrow is going to school. 
>> And my plan for the day after tomorrow is to go to school. 

There is no exercise at Taekwondo academy, because it is vacation for 6 days from that day.
>> I don't have to go to my Taekwondo academy because we have a vacation for 6 days from that day.
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