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류건우/2024-08-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Q: What activities can be done when people hangout? A: They can play or talk together whatever they want. There are actually so many things people can do when their hanging out, and they can do one of those which they want to do. I think they can also do other activities like exercising or eating a meal.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. They can play or talk together whatever they want.
>>They can play together or talk about whatever they want.

2. There are actually so many things people can do when their hanging out, and they can do one of those which they want to do.
>> There are actually so many things that people can do when they're hanging out, and they can do one of those which they want to do.

3. I think they can also do other activities like exercising or eating a meal.
>>CORRECT!