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Writing task: Is it important to do some stretching in the morning? Why or why not?

김명기/2024-08-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Doing some stretching in the morning is good for the body. Because people don't use muscles at night, stretching makes them more flexible. But it is very difficult. I'm very sleepy in the morning, so I want to sleep more. In my case, I wake up for an English call. As soon as I get up, I study English. So I can't do any stretching.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, MK!

I agree! Stretching in the morning can be very beneficial because, as you said, we don’t use our muscles while sleeping. I am also the type of person who doesn’t do much stretching, but I think we should start doing it!

- T. Caitlyn

Doing some stretching in the morning is good for the body.

>> CORRECT
Because people don't use muscles at night, stretching makes them more flexible.

>> Since people don't use their muscles at night, stretching helps make them more flexible.
But it is very difficult.

>> CORRECT
I'm very sleepy in the morning, so I want to sleep more.

>> CORRECT
In my case, I wake up for an English call.

>> In my case, I wake up for an English class.
As soon as I get up, I study English.

>> CORRECT

So I can't do any stretching.

>> CORRECT