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류건우/2024-08-19

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Q: What are the cons of social media and text messaging? A: I think the cons for both is the limit of expression. They can use a lot of words or other expressions when they're using massages, but they can't use their voice and face, so there is a limit. I think it also could be uncomfortable for the people who's typing is slow.
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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some considerations:

1. I think the cons for both is the limit of expression.
>>CORRECT!

2. They can use a lot of words or other expressions when they're using massages, but they can't use their voice and face, so there is a limit.
>>They can use a lot of words or other expressions when they're using messages, but they can't use their voices and faces, so there are limits.

3. I think it also could be uncomfortable for the people who's typing is slow.
>>I think it could also be uncomfortable for the people whose typing is slow.

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