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What was your first day at work like?

이진태/2024-08-19

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I moved new company just few month ago. so, I still remember that day. I felt unfamiler everything and little bit nervous. I also had some worries. Beacuse, it was new challenge for me.

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Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I moved new company just few month ago. so, I still remember that day.

>> I moved to a new company just a few months ago, so I still remember that day clearly.

I felt unfamiler everything and little bit nervous.

>> Everything felt unfamiliar, and I was a little bit nervous.

I also had some worries. Beacuse, it was new challenge for me.

>> I also had some worries because it was a new challenge for me.