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How frequently do you look at yourself in the mirror? How often do you discuss other people's appea

이진태/2024-08-19

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I check my hair in the mirror at least once a hours. Because, my hair is ruined easily by wind or something else. So, I tend to check my hair style frequently. However, I think discussing other's appearances is rude. So, I'm trying to avoid to discuss other people's appearances.

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Hey! It’s great that you were able to complete the homework. You shared your experiences and ideas wonderfully—keep up the excellent work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I check my hair in the mirror at least once a hours. Because, my hair is ruined easily by wind or something else.
>> I check my hair in the mirror at least once an hour because it easily gets messed up by the wind or other factors.

So, I tend to check my hair style frequently. However, I think discussing other's appearances is rude. So, I'm trying to avoid to discuss other people's appearances.
>> However, I believe discussing others' appearances is rude, so I try to avoid talking about how others look.