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How would you describe your previous job as a real estate agent?

임주미/2024-08-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I met various oeopele there from my work. The job was usually need a tention and concenntration sinec there is a trade much money and property. I loved my job

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Jumi! I guess you have absolutely loved your job in the past, Hopefully, you could find a part-time job related to it. Goodluck! Happy weekend! ^^

~T. Jewel

I met various oeopele there from my work.

>>I met various people from my work.

The job was usually need a tention and concenntration sinec there is a trade much money and property.

>>The job usually required a lot of attention and concentration, since it involved handling significant amounts of money and property.

I loved my job

>> I loved my job!

>>I truly enjoyed my job!