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What is the National Liberation Day of Korea about?

차유진/2024-08-15

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
National Liberation Day is the day when Korea was liberated from Japan, and Koreans hang Korean flags on the windows that day. National Liberation Day is important day for Korean.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello again, Yale!

Here's another edited homework. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Good night!


Cheers,
Jean~~




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National Liberation Day is the day when Korea was liberated from Japan, and Koreans hang Korean flags on the windows that day.
>> CORRECT~~

National Liberation Day is important day for Korean.
>> National Liberation Day is an important day for Koreans.
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