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You mentioned in class that you want to go on a trip. Where do you want to go? Why?

차유진/2024-08-15

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I want to go abroad because abroad are was to eat new foods, was able to go to a new place, have a long time to travel. ( ；∀；)
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Hello, Yale!

Here's your revised homework. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Happy holiday there to you! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                    You mentioned in class that you want to go on a trip. Where do you want to go? Why? 


I want to go abroad because abroad are was to eat new foods, was able to go to a new place, have a long time to travel. >> I want to go abroad because I can taste and eat new food, go to new places, and travel around for a long time.
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