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What do you think is the most beautiful but dangerous thing in the world? Explain.

차진혁/2024-08-15

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I think Baekdu Mountain is the most beautiful but dangerous thing in the world, because It has beautiful and magestic view but experts say it could be explode in 2025.
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Here's your revised composition homework, Jimmy. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below, such as not putting a comma before the word "because".  Good evening to you!


Cheers,
Jean~~



                                     

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I think Baekdu Mountain is the most beautiful but dangerous thing in the world, because It has beautiful and magestic view but experts say it could be explode in 2025.
>> I think Baekdu Mountain is the most beautiful but dangerous thing in the world because it has a beautiful and majestic view but experts say it could explode in 2025.
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